
First Bite: The Wicked Queen's Tale by Laura Briggs & Sarah Steinbrenner
Post number two is for the first book in Laura Briggs and Sarah Steinbrenner's Dark Woods Trilogy, entitled First Bite: The Wicked Queen's Tale, which, as you can most likely tell from the cover, tells the story of Snow White from her stepmother's point of view. But it was actually more than that, and, for a freebie from Amazon (now priced only at $.99, as are the other two books in the series), was really quite enjoyable.
While everyone knows the story of Snow White, I'm going to use a spoiler space, because this retelling, while definitely sticking to the original fairy tale, included some twists and turns which I'd rather not spoil for anyone may want to read this one themselves.
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So this story is actually told from several points of view, which change throughout the story as more characters are introduced. The majority of the book is told via Fortulla, a girl who ends up being the gardener for the Queen's orchards, but had other parts to play as well. We also get the obligatory chapters from the Queen herself (hence the title), and also the huntsman, who has his own story. There's even a couple of chapter's from Snow White's pov, as well as a few other characters interspersed. While the changing viewpoints could get confusing, it's actually done really well here.
Anyway, here's the premise: Fortulla grows up as the assistant of Tahilda, a midwife who is also a witch, and a servant/follower of the Queen. One night Tahilda is called to the palace, to help deliver the King and his young wife's first child, who happens to be Snow White (her real name is Blanche). Sensing that the young mother is near death, instead of helping to save her, she delivers the baby and basically delivers the mother into death's waiting arms. She also marks the child, thinking that she would be a great servant to the Evil Queen. Fortulla sees all of this but doesn't initially understand anything aside from the fact that Tahilda killed the mother. In order to escape the king's men, Tahilda disappears, leaving Fortulla to fend for herself. Fortulla is taken in by a farmer and his wife, where she tends to their apple orchards. She's seen by the Queen, who takes her as her own servant, and gives her the task of tending her one "special" tree (from which she gets the poisoned apple she later tries to use against Snow White). Towards the end, Fortulla realizes that the Queen is indeed evil, and tries to destroy her with the help of the huntsman (who has his own backstory which I won't spoil), but things sort of get turned upside down (as they do) and she has to really work to get things back to rights.
We also get a good look at the Queen's backstory as well, which was rather fascinating but also quite dark. See, she's the devil's servant, and in order to keep her looks (and get various kings/other royalty to marry her), she has to drink the blood of young maidens. The rituals that she uses are pretty spelled out and ghastly, as are her past histories, which date back to ancient Greece/Rome/Egypt, as well as a bout as a Celtic "goddess". Between her story, the huntsman's, and Fortulla, this book was literally brimming with fantastic stories. There were times I actually felt sympathetic for the Queen, who is simply trying to prolong her life in order to avoid eternity with the Devil, but then again, she's the one who entered into the bargain in the first place, which is why my sympathy kept flipping on and off throughout. Plus she's just really quite heartless; it's hard to believe that someone could actually be as cruel as she is.
My one little quibble was that the authors use a rather strange way of writing sentences, oftentimes putting periods where they should have just inserted commas, which resulted in a lot of run-on sentences/incomplete sentences and some rather poor dialogue punctuation. It was - at times - rather distracting as well, but the strength of the tale itself helped me overlook it. A really good editor, however, wouldn't go amiss!
Anyway, the ending that I was hoping for did indeed work out, including a "happily-ever-after", which I love. I found this to be a really fabulous retelling of a story everyone knows, with intriguing "surprise" narrators and a lot of blending of fairy tale with actual history. All in all, this was really well done, and I would recommend it to any fan of fairy tales, and the story of Snow White in particular.
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